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Thursday, 10 January 2013

Wow

When Tommy came
Oh how small he was
Wheeny tiny

When Tommy came
Oh how excited
We were

When Tommy came
Oh how often we thought
Wow!

By Rachel (7)

I wrote this when mum was writing her wow poem

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9 comments:

  1. Ella10 January 2013 at 13:15

    Oh, so sweet and he is a wow!
    :D

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  2. Herotomost10 January 2013 at 14:28

    Its things like this blog that give me a definite Wow factor. What a great poem, and what a lovely kitty. I am inspired beyond belief by my visit here today. Rachel, you keep on writing and watching films...I think you are destined for greatness. And mom...way to support, makes me feel giddy like a school girl at 1 am at a slumber party. Loved this.

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  3. Unknown10 January 2013 at 17:44

    New things... babies, puppies, seedlings, sprouts... all wows in my book.

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  4. Helen10 January 2013 at 17:59

    This has to be one of the sweetest WOW poems, Rachel. Nice job!!!

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky10 January 2013 at 18:22

    This is my favorite of all the WOW poems. Keep writing, Rachel!

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  6. Laurie Kolp10 January 2013 at 19:47

    Precious!

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  7. Mary10 January 2013 at 22:22

    Write on, Rachel!! Wow is wow.

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  8. Susie Clevenger11 January 2013 at 06:38

    What a precious wow!

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  9. Peggy11 January 2013 at 16:33

    Nice job!! Tommy is definitely a WOW kind of cat, I can tell!

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