It's a five word challenge with the picture below and the words:
Silver Tiny Paris Birthday Jumped
One day a tiny boy, on his birthday went on holiday to France. They went on a train to Disney and went on a spinning cup ride. When the ride finished he jumped off and ran to the silver spaceship ride.
On day five of the holiday they took a train from Disney to Paris. Then they went on an underground train to get to the Eiffel Tower. The tiny boy said it was a tall shiny tower. They took a lift to the top and looked up so they would not be scared. Then they took the steps back down.
by Rachel age 6 in Year 2 at Loddon School.
3 comments:
I liked your story. What a lovely time the boy had, Rachel!
I liked your story.
Hi, Rachel! Wow, you're a very talented writer for your age! Good job, I liked your story. :)
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