Windows windows
Shining through the winter night
Windows windows
Gleaming making the dark bright
Windows windows
Safe from all the darkness fright
Windows windows
Beautiful gleaming wonderful light
Windows windows
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I wrote this because mummy was writing poems about windows and I came up with something.
7 comments:
Hi Rachel...so nice to read a young person's work! I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing right along with your mum.
Such a very good poem about windows. I especially love "windows shining through the winter night"....and your very cool picture.
Sweet! Windows let people see outside, but WOW! Your poem reminds us people walking in the dark use light from windows too. This is true whether the light is really shining out a real window or whether a friend's insight helps me move forward in my life. Thank you.
You certainly DID come up with something ... something wonderful!
Great writing Rachel!!
I love this part:
"Beautiful gleaming wonderful light"
Keep up the good work!
nice! don't stop writing!
Thank you, Rachel. What a lovely poem. Thank you for joining us.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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