Thursday, 10 January 2013


When Tommy came
Oh how small he was
Wheeny tiny

When Tommy came
Oh how excited
We were

When Tommy came
Oh how often we thought

By Rachel (7)

I wrote this when mum was writing her wow poem


Ella said...

Oh, so sweet and he is a wow!

Herotomost said...

Its things like this blog that give me a definite Wow factor. What a great poem, and what a lovely kitty. I am inspired beyond belief by my visit here today. Rachel, you keep on writing and watching films...I think you are destined for greatness. And mom...way to support, makes me feel giddy like a school girl at 1 am at a slumber party. Loved this.

Kim Nelson said...

New things... babies, puppies, seedlings, sprouts... all wows in my book.

Helen said...

This has to be one of the sweetest WOW poems, Rachel. Nice job!!!

Loredana Donovan said...

Awww this is so sweet! Great job! :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This is my favorite of all the WOW poems. Keep writing, Rachel!

Laurie Kolp said...


Mary said...

Write on, Rachel!! Wow is wow.

Susie Clevenger said...

What a precious wow!

Peggy said...

Nice job!! Tommy is definitely a WOW kind of cat, I can tell!